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Suicide Syndicates 1 by ~wolfhawkdejavu:iconwolfhawkdejavu:



I sat sipping a savory and sweet suicide.
The scent of soy sauce, salty in smell, saturated my senses.
Suddenly, small, shiny circles struck swiftly.

A pretentious person pelted me profusely with pennies.
Protests were procured and presented passionately,
But as predicted, the penny pelter playfully persisted.

Class calls.
Curiously, copper coins continue to catapult.
Conquered in crimeless combat, I quickly conceded.
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~Suicide Syndicates: A Happy Homicide~
-(An Adventure in Alliteration)-


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The full title wouldn't fit.

~pawprntsonmyheart helped with the last stanza. Props to her!

Anyway, Creative Writing is a blast.
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~NinjaGirlSango:iconNinjaGirlSango: Jan 10, 2008, 8:52:47 PM
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Wow. Nice.
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"I'm as clever as can be and I'm very quick but don't forget, you've only got so many tricks."
~book-worms:iconbook-worms: Jan 11, 2008, 3:24:00 AM
I love the first line "I sat sipping a savory and sweet suicide" - amazing!
~pawprntsonmyheart:iconpawprntsonmyheart: Jan 11, 2008, 3:11:04 PM
:D!

I should get credit for putting alliteration in your head in the first place! =p

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K: You can't stop the beat! You can't stop the motion of the ocean or the sun in the sky...
C: *stares*
K: (aghast) Oh God I'm turning into YOU!
C: YAY! :D :hug: